tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post8768559701724203622..comments2024-03-12T05:11:42.096-07:00Comments on Write of Passage: Cause And EffectLinda Grayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00464543671077860561noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-8524693476716991182012-05-18T12:10:38.251-07:002012-05-18T12:10:38.251-07:00So true Heather. I love this. Thanks for a great r...So true Heather. I love this. Thanks for a great reminder!!Karlene Petitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17910702587514001827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-46133217937588748892012-05-17T13:02:39.971-07:002012-05-17T13:02:39.971-07:00Heather, so true. And boy I think I have several p...Heather, so true. And boy I think I have several pebble dropping into the same pond on this fourth novel. Got something different going on, and showing some of the character's backgrounds--like Bill, and Vasyl. The cause and effect is perfect. The pitch for each one has to be felt some how. <br /><br />Great post and as usual, you hit on something I'm working on. (^;Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-72944714945668680402012-05-17T12:53:12.461-07:002012-05-17T12:53:12.461-07:00I just noticed my comment was somewhat nonsensical...I just noticed my comment was somewhat nonsensical. My friend sent me an e-mail about cause and effect. There. I hope that makes sense.LinWashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13041832821260168483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-10683142780443119912012-05-17T12:50:16.022-07:002012-05-17T12:50:16.022-07:00A friend sent me about virtually the same advice a...A friend sent me about virtually the same advice about cause and effect in my WIP. Perhaps she read your post! :-D I've had to rewrite part of my WIP because I was not paying attention to the very principles you brought up (and of which she reminded me). So, I totally agree with you!!!LinWashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13041832821260168483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-7016722543169702762012-05-17T12:45:07.819-07:002012-05-17T12:45:07.819-07:00Such a valuable thing to remember, and what a grea...Such a valuable thing to remember, and what a great way to get out of a spot when you feel hemmed in with nowhere to go. Thank you!Linda Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18001433214194860481noreply@blogger.com