tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post3115456637320209125..comments2024-03-12T05:11:42.096-07:00Comments on Write of Passage: First Paragraphs for CritiqueLinda Grayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00464543671077860561noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-25240596559089303622011-09-15T15:30:54.876-07:002011-09-15T15:30:54.876-07:00Thanks so much, Lady Gwen! I'll hop right over...Thanks so much, Lady Gwen! I'll hop right over there!Linda Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18001433214194860481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-13969291687058556382011-09-15T14:02:37.809-07:002011-09-15T14:02:37.809-07:00Linda, I think both first paragraphs are intrigui...Linda, I think both first paragraphs are intriguing. Both Lyn and Myne did wonderful jobs! This is a great idea!<br /><br />P.S. I have a blog award for you over on my site:)Gwen Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-57614409157653886492011-09-14T17:58:39.921-07:002011-09-14T17:58:39.921-07:00Me too, Lyn. I'm intrigued by your opener, and...Me too, Lyn. I'm intrigued by your opener, and interested to see what Karlene and Heather say, too.Linda Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18001433214194860481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-54672198809357669352011-09-14T12:07:49.831-07:002011-09-14T12:07:49.831-07:00I'm looking forward to the critiques!I'm looking forward to the critiques!LinWashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13041832821260168483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-79999097893332785082011-09-13T08:08:26.922-07:002011-09-13T08:08:26.922-07:00Thanks, Kathi, nice to see you!Thanks, Kathi, nice to see you!Linda Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18001433214194860481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-6516760437671216212011-09-13T08:02:24.515-07:002011-09-13T08:02:24.515-07:00What a great place to receive feedback.
Fellow ca...What a great place to receive feedback.<br /><br />Fellow campaigner stopping by to say hi. :)Kathi Oram Petersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11959149321213743448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-2630823084902690182011-09-13T07:28:15.398-07:002011-09-13T07:28:15.398-07:00Thanks for stopping by, Julie, and for your nice c...Thanks for stopping by, Julie, and for your nice comment on the opening paragraphs. See you at your blog, and welcome to CSC!Linda Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18001433214194860481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-31842420005290723742011-09-13T07:23:19.797-07:002011-09-13T07:23:19.797-07:00Hi Linda! I just wanted to say thanks again for co...Hi Linda! I just wanted to say thanks again for coming by my blog, I'm so glad to have found your "Corner" here! <br /><br />I enjoyed all three of these openings, great work, ladies! I'm also looking forward to the critiques.Julie Flandershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05003737491313673214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-65610828147930958112011-09-13T06:39:14.018-07:002011-09-13T06:39:14.018-07:00Thanks Christa. This one is actually first paragra...Thanks Christa. This one is actually first paragraphs, but these two samples happen to be short. (We did have one submission that was a one-sentence paragraph, which was also great.) Thanks for dropping in!Linda Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18001433214194860481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-44057391063886837302011-09-13T05:00:05.310-07:002011-09-13T05:00:05.310-07:00I really like this idea. It's more about first...I really like this idea. It's more about first lines, yes? And both these first lines are really great. And I particularly love books that start with onions. (I'm a Peer Gynt fan).Christa Desirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15614441465633549710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-60862607718085329502011-09-12T16:03:58.010-07:002011-09-12T16:03:58.010-07:00Thanks Lydia. Look for us next week!Thanks Lydia. Look for us next week!Linda Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18001433214194860481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-4123184911307375662011-09-12T14:38:20.285-07:002011-09-12T14:38:20.285-07:00I look forward to seeing the critiques!I look forward to seeing the critiques!Lydia Kanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00484415427764822386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-74426753167118194342011-09-12T13:01:58.983-07:002011-09-12T13:01:58.983-07:00Thank you for the comments, Lorelei, I know the au...Thank you for the comments, Lorelei, I know the authors will appreciate them.Linda Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18001433214194860481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-38620806098471629792011-09-12T10:55:05.583-07:002011-09-12T10:55:05.583-07:00Nice visual I got from #1, and makes me curious to...Nice visual I got from #1, and makes me curious to read more.<br /><br />There's definite tention in #2. What is going on here?<br /><br />Can't wait to see what you guys think of them!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-79933453410277623482011-09-12T09:55:47.124-07:002011-09-12T09:55:47.124-07:00They are interesting aren't they, Lisa? I'...They are interesting aren't they, Lisa? I'm enjoying this chance to work on them a lot.Linda Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18001433214194860481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-71464247365408806792011-09-12T09:35:40.408-07:002011-09-12T09:35:40.408-07:00Very interesting paragraphs! I will be anxious to ...Very interesting paragraphs! I will be anxious to see what you ladies have to say about them. :DLisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-11387830713408508592011-09-12T09:09:29.695-07:002011-09-12T09:09:29.695-07:00Thanks, Karlene, me too.Thanks, Karlene, me too.Linda Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18001433214194860481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-891580481048489612011-09-12T08:29:43.534-07:002011-09-12T08:29:43.534-07:00Great paragraphs Ladies! Thank you for hosting thi...Great paragraphs Ladies! Thank you for hosting this Linda. I'm looking forward to working on my critique for next week. And, hearing what everyone has to say, too.Karlene Petitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17910702587514001827noreply@blogger.com