tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post2280084047625226488..comments2024-03-12T05:11:42.096-07:00Comments on Write of Passage: First Sentences Final CritiquesLinda Grayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00464543671077860561noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-86187114469199639952011-08-31T17:08:09.355-07:002011-08-31T17:08:09.355-07:00Thank you ladies for your great critiques. It'...Thank you ladies for your great critiques. It's very much appreciated. I've been so busy at work and I apologize it's taken me this long to thank you. I'm amazed at how much great feedback you've given me and I will definitely put it to good use. First I want to finish the whole manuscript before tackling the beginning again but it's nice to know the interest is there. What's held me back is the thought that who wants to read about an Italian nine-year old and why am I wasting my time? Then when I get nervous such as when I submit ANYTHING for ANYONE to read I get so rattled I start changing everything to the point that my knowledge of the English language goes out the window and I make sure to mangle perfectly good English sentences. Oy Vey! <br /><br />Joy and Gretchen I enjoyed your first sentences too and I hope we get to read your books soon. <br /><br />Thanks againDora Deehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05053336278338283781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-65875210073330415082011-08-26T09:13:03.737-07:002011-08-26T09:13:03.737-07:00Em-Musing, we'll be doing it again next month!...Em-Musing, we'll be doing it again next month! Look for the post to call for entries on Monday in September. <br /><br />LB, thank you!<br /><br />Grechen, you're very welcome! I hope they helped. :) Keep writing, you have a very interesting story there!<br /><br />Dawn, aw, you're so sweet. :)Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-14770725187188798612011-08-26T00:52:32.176-07:002011-08-26T00:52:32.176-07:00Okay, I ADORE this blog. Wonderful! I will be chec...Okay, I ADORE this blog. Wonderful! I will be checking back for sure.<br /><br />:)Dawn Kurtagichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05050668572755966474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-47054481565216938712011-08-25T12:32:56.928-07:002011-08-25T12:32:56.928-07:00Thank-you Karlene, Heather, Linda, and all the oth...Thank-you Karlene, Heather, Linda, and all the others from last Wednesday so much for the critiques, it's given me a lot to think about while going on with my writing.Grechenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11067098247432800552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-11842112864713875322011-08-25T11:49:39.286-07:002011-08-25T11:49:39.286-07:00This is great ladies. I learned a lot reading your...This is great ladies. I learned a lot reading your critiques. Very helpful. :)Karen Stronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08697785820907711723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-74458962875763061792011-08-25T08:53:09.590-07:002011-08-25T08:53:09.590-07:00Great feedback, ladies!Great feedback, ladies!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-46850665920531042232011-08-25T04:39:07.571-07:002011-08-25T04:39:07.571-07:00Hey, I wanna play. When will you do this again?Hey, I wanna play. When will you do this again?Karen Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01522178275164058849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-45123993481299299572011-08-24T22:51:03.269-07:002011-08-24T22:51:03.269-07:00Thank you Lin! We will do this again! Oh... Heathe...Thank you Lin! We will do this again! Oh... Heather said that. <br /><br />Thank you Heather for rounding this up. Fantastic! I love both your and Linda's comments. <br /><br />And LM, thank you for the nice comment. More to come.Karlene Petitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17910702587514001827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-48934889455624086922011-08-24T18:22:26.169-07:002011-08-24T18:22:26.169-07:00Oh these are good!Oh these are good!LM Prestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624508396760965680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-8652480489877316182011-08-24T12:50:27.535-07:002011-08-24T12:50:27.535-07:00Lin, hopefully we can catch you with our next mont...Lin, hopefully we can catch you with our next month's critiques!Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377741836634273944.post-85793227769398437792011-08-24T10:15:10.890-07:002011-08-24T10:15:10.890-07:00Your responses made me wish I had submitted a sent...Your responses made me wish I had submitted a sentence for critiquing! But your critiques have given me some food for thought about my WIP.LinWashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13041832821260168483noreply@blogger.com